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Old 11-29-2012, 07:06 PM   #5
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Default Re: Help grade my English homework! (no, seriously...)

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Originally Posted by agedhunter View Post
A very well written argument.
I now this is not what you wanted but I did catch 1 typo in the bibliography.

Kates and Mauser. “Waould Banning Firearms Reduce Murder and Suicide?” Harvard Journal
of Law & Public Policy Vol. 30 (May 2007): 650-693. Print.
hey, thanks! Didn't notice that, much appreciated

I need to go through again and do more proofreading and tighten up some of the sentence structure also before I actually turn it in.
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