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Old 11-29-2012, 09:35 PM   #11
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Default Re: Help grade my English homework! (no, seriously...)

will do!

Had to restrain myself with the thesis (bold highlighted):

"Restoring the right to keep and bear arms, as outlined in the U.S. Constitution, is essential to ensure our freedom and security from criminals, our government, and foreign invaders alike."

as gov't and criminals is a bit redundant!

like Mark Twain, ...but I repeat myself...
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