Re: Help grade my English homework! (no, seriously...)
yes, I used most of the suggestions, a very huge thanks again for all the help!
Going to turn it in this week, should have a grade and response come next week. I do want to change the gun show loophole wording a bit but I will probably expand this thing later and will address that in more detail after I gather more info and collect more thoughts.
"Loud noises don't end gunfights.... well placed shots do."