Very well drafted Josh! Very well done! the only typo was at the bottom... Where you say..."This muzzle
leading version is currently offered for commercial sale by Davide
Pedersoli & Company..."
You probably meant to say LOADING, and not LEADING... But other than that, it is as professional as any letter they recieve, and should be treated in the highest regards.
Forgot to add this at the end of my last post
... But again... Well done sir!