YOU tell the story.....

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by pickenup, Oct 13, 2005.

  1. pickenup

    pickenup Active Member

    This hasn’t been done in a while.
    Just add your part(s) to the continuing story.
    Have fun.


    By choice, alone, the location of his run down shack, far from any civilization. The sudden pounding on the door breaking the silence of his retreat, Greg instinctively grabbed his 45 as he hurried to investigate. Slowly opening the door........
     
  2. SouthernMoss

    SouthernMoss *Admin Tech Staff*

    Jan 1, 2003
    SW MS
    ..... he saw a boy, no older than twelve or thirteen, with a look of sheer panic on his face. "Please, mister, my Pa needs help!" Greg didn't like getting involved, it's the reason he lived so far from civilization, but he couldn't say "no" to the pleading look on the young fella's face. "I just know I'm gonna regret this," he grumbled to himself as he walked over to the gun rack...
     

  3. danurve

    danurve New Member

    and pocketed some extra ammo. Greg asks, "Whats your name son?" The boy replies ..
     
  4. xxxxxxl

    xxxxxxl New Member

    547
    Jun 19, 2004
    Texas
    "Marty, Sir" to which Greg replies "Do you have a last name son?" and Marty replies....
     
  5. Deputy Dawg

    Deputy Dawg Active Member

    Yes sir Vanripplestein.
     
  6. glocknut

    glocknut Active Member

    ...Just then, greg lets loose a monsterous fart the likes of which the county had never heard... to which the little boy said...
     
  7. Glockgod

    Glockgod New Member

    61
    Aug 24, 2005
    Was that a fire truck that went by? Smells like diesel fumes and sounded like a big horn!
     
  8. glocknut

    glocknut Active Member

    hehehe... do i know how to kill a thread or what ?!! :D

    mike
    gn
     
  9. Glockgod

    Glockgod New Member

    61
    Aug 24, 2005
    Greg says" Thats why I went back for more ammo " And the little boy asks"....................................................................................
     
  10. glocknut

    glocknut Active Member

    ....and the little boy ask's, why would you need more ammo sir....with all that gass, you could just blow up the bad guys !!!! And to that Greg says.....
     
  11. Glockgod

    Glockgod New Member

    61
    Aug 24, 2005
    "You said you're pa is in trouble, whathappened?' And Marty replied.........................................................................
     
  12. glocknut

    glocknut Active Member

    ...and marty replied...yeah, he's constipated !!! The big bad Government Man came along and offered him a big block of cheese after we lost our home in new orleans !!! He ate all that cheese in one setting, and went to sit down on the pot and......
     
  13. gunfreakboy

    gunfreakboy Member

    334
    Sep 20, 2005
    Buffalo, N.Y.
    Then he told greg that his voice had changed but his breath smelled the same.
     
  14. Huck Finn

    Huck Finn Member

    877
    Aug 17, 2004
    It was then, that the old man first saw the buzzrds circling. A second later, his senses came alive! There was no doubt in his mind. That smell was one he will never forget...Purple Kool-Aid.
    Huck
     
  15. lead

    lead Well-Known Member

    May 16, 2004
    Missouri
    It was the smell of the purple kool-aid that they served him in the first Gulf war, just before that incident with the camel and his sargent. "Wait", he said. "Did you say your last name was VanRipplestein?!" "That was my sargent's name." "Does your father still have the use of both his eyes, or any of his toes?"
     
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